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Euclid the Kid
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since 2000-07-15
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Eugene,Oregon

0 posted 2001-02-12 01:23 PM


Angie Faye, my special jewel
in my spinning world,
you are my only heart's desire
my One-in-a-Million Girl!

Your name to me says something
of you, who my heart won,
you are my special ANGEL
with FAIRY magic, my life you have spun.

How could I be so lucky
above all the rest,
who sought you as their Babe of Babes
I'm the one who aced the test.

And so on this Day of Love
with a rose, on bended knee,
I ask you to be my Valentine--
now 'til eternity!!!

All my love to you Sweet Babe,

         Dean

          


© Copyright 2001 Euclid the Kid - All Rights Reserved
Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-02-12 01:31 PM


She'll love it... haha...
I have yet to write a Valentine's poem... although I know that I should.  (she'll kill me otherwise!  ~_^)
Great job!  Never have seen you before.  Nice meeting you, hope to see you more.
-Allan

When the sun dies, and the earth is thrown off its axis, the two of us will still, at that moment, be thinking of one another. ~~Allan, to Amanda

fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958

2 posted 2001-02-12 01:42 PM


That was beautiful.  I think she will like it quite a bit.  Keep up the good writing, Euclid.  Like the name too, cuz I kinda like math and science.
jeremydraul
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State of Despair
3 posted 2001-02-12 02:38 PM


I guess your a romantic eh? Nice job on this one, it was full of love and kindness, i loved:
"I'm the one who aced the test."
Nice job

Jeremy


"Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark." - Jeremy Raulinaitis---'Fading Me Away'

Acies
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Twilight Zone
4 posted 2001-02-12 05:52 PM


let me
you really the girl, right?
and you're , makes you
show her this poem and she'd defenitely give you her

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



Dopey Dope
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5 posted 2001-02-12 07:05 PM


Very nice........
hehe......very sweet



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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