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Angelwings
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since 1999-08-27

Posts 222
IL, USA

0 posted 2001-02-12 12:24 PM

You're leaving.
Time has run out.
I couldn't find the words to say how I truly felt for you.
The way I feel when I'm near you is indescribable.
Not needing to speak, and yet feeling spoken words between us.
A vibe passed between us; a feeling hopefully shared.
I couldn't begin to exlain the way you make me feel.
I couldn't even define it.  What makes me feel that way about you?
You truly encompass everything I want.  Your smile, your eyes, your continuous grin, the way you lose yourself in music, as I do.
Explain to me why you bring out this shyness about me that is altogother new.
Do you feel the same about me at all?

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-02-12 01:24 PM

How sad... to see someone leaving your life, someone of such signifigance.
I can understand exactly what you are going through at this moment, truly. It is not an easy thing to do.
You did an excellent job on the poem. Such a question should be asked before this person leaves.
-Allan

When the sun dies, and the earth is thrown off its axis, the two of us will still, at that moment, be thinking of one another. ~~Allan, to Amanda

Angelwings
Member

since 1999-08-27

Posts 222
IL, USA

2 posted 2001-02-12 02:26 PM

Thank you for your words. It is truly hard to deal with after a person leaves. Unfortunately, I have said goodbye to this wonderful friend. However, maybe it's not forever. Thank you for reading my poetry.

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

3 posted 2001-02-12 02:45 PM

It must be tough but pull through... really good job at portraying your feelings, keep it up!

Jeremy

"Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark." - Jeremy Raulinaitis---'Fading Me Away'

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-02-12 05:56 PM

one question

did u tell him how you really feel about him before he left?

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Angelwings
Member

since 1999-08-27

Posts 222
IL, USA

5 posted 2001-02-12 07:31 PM

Thank you for your comments.

To answer the one question. Yes, I did tell him how I felt. It hurt just as bad though.

Chelsea

Good luck in future writings

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-02-12 07:54 PM

Very nicely done here.
I haven't seen you before so HI!
I liked this, hope to see you soon.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Angelwings
Member

since 1999-08-27

Posts 222
IL, USA

7 posted 2001-02-12 11:00 PM

Thank you. I like your quote by the way. Unfortunately I have had quite the spout of writer's block. I moved to college and my juices stopped flowing. Recently I said goodbye to a great friend. And here came this one. Good luck in future writings and hello yourself!

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

8 posted 2001-02-13 08:32 PM

Nice job on this poem! I think this is the first time I've seen you too, so hi

I hope you write more peoms and post them for us

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

Angelwings
Member

since 1999-08-27

Posts 222
IL, USA

9 posted 2001-02-14 02:06 AM

Thank you for your kind words as well. I appreciate you reading my poetry and a big hello to you as well.

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