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Too Few Words Spoken |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Oh to be loved... Its one of the most wonderful feelings to feel within, But i regretfully say, I no longer feel it from him.. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
wow babe~ this was so good, i liked it short, has more meaning that way in a sorta twisted way. but im sorry ron's bein like this. anytime u wanna talk u know what to do!  *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
It's lovely. Try to Senryu it! That would make it better! **dodges the tomatoes** What? Just my nosy opinion! best of luck with this, Sugar High! -Allan When the sun dies, and the earth is thrown off its axis, the two of us will still, at that moment, be thinking of one another. ~~Allan, to Amanda |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
LoL Thanx for your advice Allan but im not very into senryu's...And thanks Kiley!! I know what you mean about having it have more meaning! Thanks for your replies! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
simple and beautiful.....sorry to hear that you feel this way I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like this just as it is, nice job on the poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very sad.......that's all i can say.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Thank You All for your replies! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
belivoquent.... nice words Jeremy "Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark." - Jeremy Raulinaitis---'Fading Me Away' |
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