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pixiechild
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0 posted 2001-02-11 11:44 AM


A friendship of so long
can easily turn into love right or wrong
Knowing you like someone
can last forever on and on
Untill the day you decide
just how right it feels inside
to tell that special someone
just how special he makes yor life

Then everything changes for a while
but later it gets easier to understand
the meaning of all these feelings I demand
but not knowing that persons feelings for you
can be somewhat confussing, oh so true

So now I declair my love for you
hoping it has some meaning
or at least some kind of mutual feeling.

© Copyright 2001 Chantelle - All Rights Reserved
LoveBug
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1 posted 2001-02-11 01:26 PM


This post is being closed temporarily, since the author has broken the guidelines by posting more than 3 threads in one day. If you have any questions, feel free to e-mail me!



"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

Acies
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2 posted 2001-02-13 09:43 AM


now that Erica has unlocked this thread, I'll bump it up for ya

by the way, Poem is really good

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2001-02-13 02:30 PM


NIcely done here. I liked this very much!You've been writing a lot about friendship lately!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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