I can really relate to this one. We often begin what we never finish, and spin around it emotionally, like a carousel. Hated bliss... I can see how this could be a true concept.
Critiques... Well, I could say that you don't pay enough attention to sylliblic organization. It can be just as important as rhyme in most cases, and improves the flow. I would have been a bit more sylliblically organized in this piece. Although, that could alter the feeling. Just my nosy opinion.
Overall, a good poem. Nice to see you posting again.
When the sun dies, and the earth is thrown off its axis, the two of us will still, at that moment, be thinking of one another. ~~Allan, to Amanda