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pixiechild
Junior Member

since 2001-02-02

Posts 35

0 posted 2001-02-10 03:10 PM

Why was I so blind to see
that we were never meant to be
I should have listened to my friend
and i wouldn't have been hurt in the end
Never imagined it could be this way
had the same feelings day after day

I knew the day would come
as you listen to some
when they tell you harsh little lies
that made us come to sudden goodbyes

At first I was really sad
but now i could't be more glad
learning alot from my mistakes
now matter how long it takes...
lying to myself for so long
just couldn't have been more wrong!
Our "love" like a dying dove
but now I know it was lust not love.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-02-10 04:26 PM

I understand this completely.....although I've never been through that situation....I've thought about it.....like...i THOUGHT i was in it but i truly wasn't. Anyway, nice one here!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

2 posted 2001-02-10 05:19 PM

this was great!! I LOVE IT!

keep up great writing like this

~VALERIE~

*...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2001-02-10 06:14 PM

"learning alot from my mistakes
now matter how long it takes..."

Learning from mistakes can be a great thing for a person. Great job of writing this poem!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

pixiechild
Junior Member

since 2001-02-02

Posts 35

4 posted 2001-02-11 03:38 AM

thank u for reading my work and the comments will be kept.

pix

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-02-11 05:37 PM

It's good that you've accepted the mistakes you've had or done
it's even better to see that you're learning from it
good for you

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

6 posted 2001-02-11 09:35 PM

Cute.
It is important to be able to distinguish between the two concepts.
-Allan

When the sun dies, and the earth is thrown off its axis, the two of us will still, at that moment, be thinking of one another. ~~Allan, to Amanda

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