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Wheelsgirl
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since 2001-02-09
Posts 21
MA, USA

0 posted 2001-02-10 12:49 PM


Love
When will I ever find such a thing?
My mind goes crazy just thinking about it.
“love” theirs just something about saying that word that makes me feel so
good,
Sometimes it makes me want to sing.
The words “I love you” they sound so good when somebody you love really
means it.
But what if they don’t mean it then what do you do?
Do you say to them I thought I could love you they way you loved me,
But I guess that’s not true.
These are the things I think about when it comes to wondering,
Is love really something for me?
Do I really want to experience want love if I’m so uncertain?
I don’t know if I really want to find “Mr. Right” if this is how I feel.
If I do find “Mr. Right” how will I know he’s the right one?
With all these questions that I have with no answers,
Who will I find to answer them?
Maybe I’ll never get the chance to find out,
But we’ll see It might be too early to tell what love is because I’m only 17.

© Copyright 2001 Kelly Gambon - All Rights Reserved
Ski*Chick
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since 2001-01-13
Posts 141
Fitchburg, Mass, Usa
1 posted 2001-02-10 01:23 PM


Kelly- Nice poem, Eric is over. Well catch ya later call me or email me. Bye ~*~Ski*Chick~*~


Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
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San Juan, Puerto Rico
2 posted 2001-02-10 04:52 PM


OHhhhhhhh so this is kelly.........minna's best friend.....yea read about you in that poem.
Well nice one here........Love.....love is complicated........too beautiful a feeling to not say.....too strong a feeling to always say.....



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

HiddenSparklez
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since 2000-12-29
Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada
3 posted 2001-02-10 08:58 PM


Nice poem... so many questions and yet so many answers to find.

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

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4 posted 2001-02-11 05:30 PM


It's actually going thru the "Mr./Ms. Wrong" that makes a realize who "Mr./Ms. Wright" is.  One of the ironies of life.

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



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