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Ski*Chick
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0 posted 2001-02-10 11:15 AM


Why
do you ignore me when we chat
I try being nice to you but it never works

all you want is your friends I feel like you've,turned your back on me
do you care anymore?

you think your funny I don't
you think everyone likes you as a friend
they don't like you as a friend

cause what you did to me
like ignored me, hurt me

I know your mad at me
but that doesn't mean you can be mean to me

if you were my friend you'd be online or sending me emails
I hope you see this poem someday.

Ski*Chick



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1 posted 2001-02-10 11:54 AM


Ugh...I know EXACTLY how you feel and it is not fun at all. I hope your "friend" starts treating you better. But onto the poem...it was great. Very simple, honest, and short.

Just something you might want to think about...sometimes, despite our pride, the communication has to begin with ourselves.


I am no one if not myself.

Angel of Darkness



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2 posted 2001-02-10 12:35 PM


Me as well.
I think it's a poet thing.  ~_^
One reason I started writing was because nobody listened to me.
Great poem.
-Allan


We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

Ski*Chick
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3 posted 2001-02-10 12:40 PM


The guy he doesn't understand me, like used too. Now he ignores me, his girlfriend my ex friend is so rude. It took me a while to find all my real friends. Ski*Chick


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4 posted 2001-02-10 01:07 PM


Oh. So terribly sad. Friendships aren't always what we'd like them to be huh?  
Good luck.
xoxo
Jenn


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5 posted 2001-02-10 04:29 PM


Sweet



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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6 posted 2001-02-10 05:48 PM


maybe he's not even worth your friendship
keep your head up
stay strong

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



Ski*Chick
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7 posted 2001-02-10 05:59 PM


he's not even my friend

If someone hates you, they never loved you.

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8 posted 2001-02-11 09:20 PM


Im sorry he's doin this to you and your absolutely right that just cuz he's mad he has no right to treat u this way and im glad that you realized that! Great poem hun..keep it up!
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