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Andrea4writes Junior Member
since 2000-12-03
Posts 31Fayetteville, NC USA |
Always I have loved you, and only you, For years upon years and still more, But you have only thought of me as a friend And it hurts me that you can't see me as more. My darling, Don't you understand how much you mean to me, How much I care for you, How much I wish that maybe one day you would come to me? You turn to me when you are hurt, not to her. You come to me to ask how life's problems can be fixed. Did you ever think that maybe It was me you were searching for? I knew, always. <3Andrea ~luvs~ Anthony,<3 You only live once so live it to the fullest.. Love comes and goes but friends stay for ever~!~!~!~!~! |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nice poem! I really enjoyed it. The ending was a neat twist. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This is a hard thing, to love someone who isn't aware of it and maybe doesn't feel the same way. Good luck, and nice poem.  xoxo Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here. I liked this one. It's hard going through unrequited love......sometimes it's better off to express your feelings openly rather than to waste your time.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
nice job, i've been in this position many times. but then i always manage to find someone else who actually likes me! and so will you ~*Valerie*~ *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This one expresses these feelings very well, and as Dopey said, express your feelings because not doing so is just wasting time. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is how i've noticed it works. Someone likes me, but i don't like her I like someone else, but she doesn't like me it keeps going and going like a chain till a match is actually made for 2 people to meet and be happy, it takes a lot of other people to hurt first i'll stop babling now, im not making any sense I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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