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Andrea4writes Junior Member
since 2000-12-03
Posts 31Fayetteville, NC USA |
Lost Without You As days go by, I think of you, The warmth of your touch and everything you do. I miss you truly, why can't you see, How much I love you and what you mean to me. The way you held me in bed a night, Kept me safe from harm and fright. You made me happy deep down inside, You gave me strength, you gave me pride. You picked me up when I was down, You made me smile when I had a frown. Your words soothed me and kept me protected, There was never a time that I felt neglected. The question is why don't you like me anymore, Nevermind, you say I'm a whore. Someday you'll realize what you have lost, When your girlfriend again, gives you a toss. I don't regret anything that we had, Although it makes me angry and sad. It hurt real bad, I want you to know, But you're on the move, you're on the go. I cared about you with my heart, soul and mind, You were so loving, so caring and kind. I can promise you that I always will care, And never forget the memories we shared. But it's all over, now it's in the past, The love in my heart will always last. <3Andrea ~luvs~ Anthony,<3 You only live once so live it to the fullest.. Love comes and goes but friends stay for ever~!~!~!~!~! |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
This is such a beautiful and heartfelt poem. I think we all in a sense can understand your feelings. It's so hard to let go of a wonderful relationship. I wish you the best.  I am no one if not myself. Angel of Darkness |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
perfect example of pouring one's heart out. You have penned beautifully your sentiments. great write.....keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well I felt the love in this poem. I know how this feels to a T. Nicely done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Im sorry to hear about your breakup but i think that you have the right attitude towards it. This was a very heartfelt poem and i hope that things work out for the best in the end...Great job! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great job of writing this poem out, it's done really well. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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