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princess^sarah
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0 posted 2001-02-10 12:02 PM


mirror mirror why cant you see
that im the prettiest of them all.

the others are ,
all of the ritches,
all they want is for me to be dead.
mirror mirror look at me
mirror mirror count to three
mirror mirror close your eyes
mirror mirror remember all those fun times we had together
mirror mirror now,
whois the prettiest of them all?

this ones talking bout how the girls that mostly get the guys r the rich ones they only get guys for there money.


[This message has been edited by acire (edited 02-11-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 sarah alford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-02-10 02:12 AM


hmmm...Don't mean to make any waves here but I'm guessing your not one of those b*tchy rich girls? Anyways great poem, I really liked the whole mirror part of it.

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2 posted 2001-02-10 12:20 PM


Whoa....simmer down now before you bust a seam. I know what you mean and all, but getting angry and upset doesn't change the situation. Just be happy with yourself and continue to be yourself. That'll definately make you the prettiest.



I am no one if not myself.

Angel of Darkness



Allan Riverwood
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3 posted 2001-02-10 12:46 PM


Sarah, you really gave those rich um... chicks a tongue-lashing here.
And so they deserve it.  ^_^
Great job, hon!  You get better every day.
-Allan

We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

Jenn Cirrincione
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4 posted 2001-02-10 12:52 PM


Yeah, I never liked girls like that. Oh well, they'll lose all of their money when their father's business goes down the tubes and the stock exchange takes a nose dive; then they'll be in trailer parks watching Jerry Springer on their little black and white T.V.'s. hehehe    
xoxo
Jenn


"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia






[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 02-10-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-02-10 04:45 PM


Can't wait till acire reads this one.

YOU GO GIRL!!!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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