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And So It Comes

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Dark Enchantress
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0 posted 02-09-2001 11:12 PM       View Profile for Dark Enchantress   Email Dark Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Dark Enchantress's Home Page   View IP for Dark Enchantress

Excuse me, sir.
Pardon my tone
but I believe
you've stepped on my shoes
Oh do't get defensive, sir.
I only mean to tell you
so that...oh I know..like you said
I'm so clumsy

Sorry to have disturbed you, sir.
but I've been waiting for a long time
and I've got other things
that I have to do
I don't mean that it's not worth it
but I...nevermind...
I'll keep waiting, sir.

I hate to seem disrespectful, sir.
But I really do disagree
Please stop yelling at me
It's just a matter of opinion
I suppose you're right, sir
I don't know a thing
I'm sorry I ever said a word

And so it comes...

But what can I say, sir?
I like to do things my own way
I don't want nor need
all your comments and commands
So excuse me, sir,
for disregarding you
And with all disrespect, sir,
I'll be going now.


I am no one if not myself.

Angel of Darkness






[This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 02-09-2001).]
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Dark Enchantress
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1 posted 02-09-2001 11:17 PM       View Profile for Dark Enchantress   Email Dark Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dark Enchantress's Home Page   View IP for Dark Enchantress

Oke, this one I just did off the top of my head...didn't really change it around or anything...just typed it as it came to me. So that's why it's kinda...well, bad.  

I am no one if not myself.

Angel of Darkness


Angel in Flight
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2 posted 02-09-2001 11:26 PM       View Profile for Angel in Flight   Email Angel in Flight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel in Flight

WONDERFUL!!!! I loved this dearly, and it truly is a poem from the heart!!! I am very proud of you for personal reasons. Library material here, and thank you for sharing this with us all.
Allan Riverwood
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3 posted 02-10-2001 12:22 PM       View Profile for Allan Riverwood   Email Allan Riverwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allan Riverwood

This was... wonderful.
I hate having to respect someone simply because they are in a position of authority.
I completely understand what you are saying.  I jumped with joy at the end!
-Allan


We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM
Dark Enchantress
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4 posted 02-10-2001 12:39 PM       View Profile for Dark Enchantress   Email Dark Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dark Enchantress's Home Page   View IP for Dark Enchantress

Well I just kind of got fed up with people allowing themselves to be walked all over....just as much as I'm fed up with the people who actually do the walking.  I'm very passionate about freedom, individuality, and self expression. As you can imagine I've started many battles over this. lol But it's something that I believe in and therefore I will always continue to battle.

I am no one if not myself.

Angel of Darkness


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5 posted 02-10-2001 03:59 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

well it's not yer best, but very different and that is why i am going to say I liked it.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily
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6 posted 02-10-2001 05:33 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

respect is earned
it's also hard to give respect to someone who doesn't give it back
specially someone who steps on your toes
nice write
keep sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


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7 posted 02-10-2001 09:40 PM       View Profile for ~sugarpie313~   Email ~sugarpie313~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~sugarpie313~

i like this one! it's not bad at all!!  
shows great voicing of opinion :>
great job, keep writin!!

~*VaLeRiE*~

*Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes*
Angel in Flight
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8 posted 02-10-2001 09:49 PM       View Profile for Angel in Flight   Email Angel in Flight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Angel in Flight

oh my..I'm sorry I cant believe I have forgot to put this into my library. Wonderful read once again.


Keep searching, we are here, you only have to find us.~ Amanda
jeremydraul
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9 posted 02-11-2001 01:35 AM       View Profile for jeremydraul   Email jeremydraul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jeremydraul

i must agree with everyone but dopes, it is one of ur best.. it so weird.. nice job

JeremY


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Lakewalker
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10 posted 02-11-2001 10:49 PM       View Profile for Lakewalker   Email Lakewalker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lakewalker

I like it, it seemed real.  I kind of knew where you where going with it, but it was still really good!  

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Tears of Glass
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11 posted 02-12-2001 08:39 AM       View Profile for Tears of Glass   Email Tears of Glass   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tears of Glass

Good job on this one!  I liked it..

*Jennifer
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My Memina... this makes me want to hug you...

*heads of and emails you*

~ Titus

I'm dealing with too much.... I'm loosing control.

Dark Enchantress
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13 posted 03-16-2002 02:17 AM       View Profile for Dark Enchantress   Email Dark Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dark Enchantress's Home Page   View IP for Dark Enchantress

Ewww... I hate this one. lol

-- the calm before the storm --

La vie est plus belle quand on l'ecrit soi-meme.

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