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And So It Comes |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Excuse me, sir. Pardon my tone but I believe you've stepped on my shoes Oh do't get defensive, sir. I only mean to tell you so that...oh I know..like you said I'm so clumsy Sorry to have disturbed you, sir. but I've been waiting for a long time and I've got other things that I have to do I don't mean that it's not worth it but I...nevermind... I'll keep waiting, sir. I hate to seem disrespectful, sir. But I really do disagree Please stop yelling at me It's just a matter of opinion I suppose you're right, sir I don't know a thing I'm sorry I ever said a word And so it comes... But what can I say, sir? I like to do things my own way I don't want nor need all your comments and commands So excuse me, sir, for disregarding you And with all disrespect, sir, I'll be going now. I am no one if not myself. Angel of Darkness [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 02-09-2001).] |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Oke, this one I just did off the top of my head...didn't really change it around or anything...just typed it as it came to me. So that's why it's kinda...well, bad.  I am no one if not myself. Angel of Darkness |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
WONDERFUL!!!! I loved this dearly, and it truly is a poem from the heart!!! I am very proud of you for personal reasons. Library material here, and thank you for sharing this with us all. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This was... wonderful. I hate having to respect someone simply because they are in a position of authority. I completely understand what you are saying. I jumped with joy at the end! -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Well I just kind of got fed up with people allowing themselves to be walked all over....just as much as I'm fed up with the people who actually do the walking. I'm very passionate about freedom, individuality, and self expression. As you can imagine I've started many battles over this. lol But it's something that I believe in and therefore I will always continue to battle.  I am no one if not myself. Angel of Darkness |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
well it's not yer best, but very different and that is why i am going to say I liked it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
respect is earned it's also hard to give respect to someone who doesn't give it back specially someone who steps on your toes nice write keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
i like this one! it's not bad at all!! shows great voicing of opinion :> great job, keep writin!! ~*VaLeRiE*~ *Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes* |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
oh my..I'm sorry I cant believe I have forgot to put this into my library. Wonderful read once again. Keep searching, we are here, you only have to find us.~ Amanda |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
i must agree with everyone but dopes, it is one of ur best.. it so weird.. nice job JeremY "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like it, it seemed real. I kind of knew where you where going with it, but it was still really good! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 02-11-2001).] |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Good job on this one! I liked it.. *Jennifer |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
 My Memina... this makes me want to hug you... *heads of and emails you* ~ Titus I'm dealing with too much.... I'm loosing control. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Ewww... I hate this one. lol -- the calm before the storm -- |
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