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Angel Bee
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0 posted 2001-02-09 10:46 PM


Your

Sends so many emotions
Melts my heart
Illuminates your face
Lets me see who you are
Extends out to everyone

© Copyright 2001 Angel Bee - All Rights Reserved
Acies
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1 posted 2001-02-09 10:48 PM


short but full of meaning
I've always like people who smiled
It gives out all these good feelings to others that some people just take for granted
awesome poem...i love it

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



Allan Riverwood
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2 posted 2001-02-10 11:50 AM


Nice acronym.  The smile is a powerful tool.
I haven't done an acrostic poem in awhile.  Perhaps I should dust off my old skills and delve for awhile?
Just one more weekend activity.  ~_^
Good job.
-Allan

We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

Dark Enchantress
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3 posted 2001-02-10 12:01 PM


Behold the power of a smile...

you've captured it very well.  


I am no one if not myself.

Angel of Darkness



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4 posted 2001-02-10 03:47 PM


nice job on this one.......
I liked it.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Lakewalker
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On the streets w/ people
5 posted 2001-02-11 05:24 PM


Smiles are wonderful


"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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