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Not being able to understand my parents sometimes
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Not being able to understand my parents sometimes |
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Wheelsgirl Junior Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 21MA, USA |
Understanding You... All I need from you is understanding, Why is our relationship never holding up to me being so demanding, We should at least be kind enough to listen to each other instead of bickering. Understanding you should be easy, In doing so my eyes and almost always start tearing, You are my mentor, my role model and my best friend, And you always will be, that is until my life comes to an end. In my eyes I'll never stop loving you the way that I do, My eyes will never have shame showing through in any way towards you, And I mean that, and I mean that, I really mean that for sure, I believe that for the way I feel there is no to cure. Understanding you should be easy, In doing so my eyes almost always start tearing, You are my mentor, my role model and my best friend, And you always will be, that is until my life comes to an end. I hope that someday the relationship between us will get better, So that as you breathe your last few breaths on this earth we can cry on each others shoulders togather, The love that doesn't always look or sound like it is around will then very brightly show through to you. I hope this song reaches out to your heart, Well before we ever part, Whether it be by losing a life or a change in location, I hope our gratitude towards each other will someday change and we can laugh happily as a mother and daughter eventually once again. Understanding you should be so easy, In doing so my eyes almost always start tearing, You are my mentor, my role model and my best friend, And you always will be, that is until my life comes to an end. I love you, I love you, I love you. I love you and will always for an eternity. |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
This was good. I can somewhat realate, my mom makes me really mad sometimes. :o) Keep writing. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
every person is different, so no matter how close you two are, relative or not, differences will arise. Thus leading to arguements. This doesn't mean that she doesn't love youo as much as you have shown your love for her in this poem. Great write thanks for the read keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Good job. Great use of repitition in the end. It's nice to have someone like this, isn't it? I know the feeling myself. Keep up the good work. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
Kelly-- that was good  *Ski*Chick* |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
GReat job of writing this poem!! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice song here. I liked it very much. I think the thoughts expressed here and real and written strongly.......keep posting.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
I'm agreeing with everyone else, that this was a great piece of work and that you should keep posting!  "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
i agree!!! GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!! *Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes* |
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