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The River |
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Wheelsgirl Junior Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 21MA, USA |
The River It flows wherever it’s wildest dreams may occur, Where Heartache and Passion collide. There will be a lot of things that on it’s own it can not decide, Someone must make these decisions to keep it flowing, but who? That person can be anyone you wish, but the person that does the majority of the thinking should be you. “The River” is life as it explains, “The River” is just a name. Dreams you can conquer and count, Therefore please don’t treat life like a little tiny ounce. |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
ohhhh... I like this a very lot!!!! Wonderfully made poem. Great job on this. Keep searching, we are here, you only have to find us.~ Amanda |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
i know it's your second post, but you're still new so.... WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!  I'm glad to see you've decided to join our family of poets. Or as PIP calls it, family of friends. Hope you enjoy posting and reading poems as much as we all do. Your poem is magnificent I see you're defenitely gonna feel at home in here I love your post  thanks for sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
Good Job .. Welcome to Passions In Poetry. ~*~Ski*Chick aka Minna~*~    |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Great poem. Very, very true... I am no one if not myself. Angel of Darkness |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, Nice job on this poem, I like it, keep them coming:xorcist: "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions..... nicely done here on this one. I liked the last thought about not treating life like it's petty. Good job on it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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