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Andrea4writes
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since 2000-12-03
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Fayetteville, NC USA

0 posted 2001-02-09 06:14 PM


Love

This unending joy I feel
I hope this is for real,
The constant smile on my face
I'm floating high in space.

The nervous butterflies
to look into your eyes,
The closeness I miss
from your warm gentle kiss.

The unending fear,
all the pain and tears,
A broken heart
from growing apart.

A long summer walk,
a midnight talk,
A hug, a kiss,
oh these I have missed.

Now together,
always and forever.

This must be what love is.


_____________________________________

Hey you guys i dont know if you remember me but im back... lol well i got some really good knews im getting married  it will be in june on the 9th...

talk to you guys latter.....



<3Andrea ~luvs~ Anthony,<3

You only live once so live it to the fullest..
Love comes and goes but friends stay for ever~!~!~!~!~!


© Copyright 2001 Andrea Strout - All Rights Reserved
Neokrew
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since 2000-12-24
Posts 60
VA
1 posted 2001-02-09 06:59 PM


Hey,

Congratulations !!!!!! and the poem really touched me because I could relate. Keep on posting I think I will enjoy your work.

      --Neo

Ski*Chick
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since 2001-01-13
Posts 141
Fitchburg, Mass, Usa
2 posted 2001-02-09 07:59 PM


I liked the poem, hope you and your husband have a great time together! Bye Sk*Chick!




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3 posted 2001-02-09 10:23 PM


Congratulations



I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



Allan Riverwood
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4 posted 2001-02-10 11:53 AM


Love the poem.  Had a great flow to it, I breezed through it but digested every part.  Well done.
And congratulations!
-Allan

We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

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5 posted 2001-02-10 11:07 PM


Nice one here and congrats!
Wonderful news!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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6 posted 2001-02-11 09:24 PM


These sound like wonderful feelings...you should feel very lucky to have all that you have with this person! Great poem and im glad that everything is so wonderful for you!
Lakewalker
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7 posted 2001-02-11 10:41 PM


Nice job on this and congratulations!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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