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anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

0 posted 2001-02-09 11:01 AM

Very short this one.

It was done,
You lived it,
You can't escape it.
Deal with it.
It may have been,
Horrific and unjust.
Your innocence was not important,
Deal with it yourself.

~AF~

"Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment."
Buddha

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-02-09 04:41 PM

very very strong words
tirade at times
good post
keep sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

DancinQueen

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since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

2 posted 2001-02-09 05:03 PM

yeah i liked this..short and to the point but with so much emotion showing through. great job

*dq

¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

fractal007
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since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

3 posted 2001-02-09 05:12 PM

I like it. I trust this was written for someone in particular?

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

4 posted 2001-02-09 07:00 PM

Thanks guys and yes Fractal, it was written for me.

"Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment."
Buddha

Neokrew
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since 2000-12-24

Posts 60
VA

5 posted 2001-02-09 07:12 PM

hahahahaha

This is about the size of all my poems

but to the point this is good I enjoyed reading it.

--Neo

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

6 posted 2001-02-10 11:39 AM

Reading this over a few times made it kind of sound like a mantra...
This might be useful in many situations for me, so to the library you go.
You told me you were taking a break from poetry, because reading them over is only bad for you? Keep this one. Reading it over was even good for me.
-Allan

We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-02-10 04:55 PM

Wow......this poem was deep. Very powerful. It hit me right in the heart......I'm sorry if something horrible happened to you.
If you ever need to talk.......you know I'm here......Just offering an ear.

Anyway nice poem though, very VERY nicely done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

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On the streets w/ people

8 posted 2001-02-10 06:06 PM

I think DQ was right, and great job on this poem.

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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HiddenSparklez
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since 2000-12-29

Posts 190
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2001-02-10 09:00 PM

I like short poems, because it feeds the emotion right to you! Good poem.

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

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