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Neokrew
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0 posted 2001-02-09 07:45 AM


My life is not worth living
I can't take it anymore
The constant stares of the blind
People, people who only see me
For what I wear

I am not suicidal
Just sick of the titles
People only looking at my
Appearance not knowing me
Well it's all over now

All done with we are through
My life is not over not by far
It is just beginning a new
And the first words I say to you
           *cough* you
        

                --Neo


Note: I am not sure if I can put anything on that last line after I say to you but it was a four letter word and the behind it was you so I am not sure if I can even put this but oh well hope you guys and girls enjoy it.




[This message has been edited by Neokrew (edited 02-10-2001).]

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Tears of Glass
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1 posted 2001-02-09 08:31 AM


Wow.. awesome poem!  I understand completely what you're saying.  I'm sick of the titles too.  But you know you can always talk to me right?  I hope you know that.  I'll talk to you later.  And great writing...

*Jennifer

DancinQueen
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2 posted 2001-02-09 10:30 AM


Yeah I agree, its a shame that people judge others by their appearance and not their true self. We all get so caught up in material things that we'd rather be seen with someone thats goodlooking and rich rather then someone who has the best personality ever. Oh has society changed, keep your chin up tho and smile because you're YOU  

*dq


¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

jeremydraul
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3 posted 2001-02-09 02:36 PM


wow! way to put it: "I am not suicidal
Just sick of the titles" nice job, keep it up!

JeremY


"I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.)

Neokrew
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4 posted 2001-02-09 06:28 PM


Hey,

Thanx for the replyies and I hope I don't get in too much trouble for this peom but anyway your replies are greatly appreciated. Oh and Jenn I am so mad you did not eat lunch with me   heheh cya soon/write soon

--Neo

Allan Riverwood
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5 posted 2001-02-10 11:16 AM


Great poem, Neokrew!  Personally I'm not sure if it's the best one you've ever written, I've read pieces by you that I enjoyed even more.
Nonetheless, a great piece here.
*cough* you... that sums it up nicely.  ~_^
-Allan

We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

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6 posted 2001-02-10 03:56 PM


cough you?
what's that?

haha nice poem though.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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