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Hardkore
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since 2001-01-31
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San DIego, California

0 posted 2001-02-08 10:29 PM


How did we all think
Before we knew how to speak
Were all our thoughts true?


Passion fuels my love
Passion becomes consumed by my love
Without my love I become passionless


© Copyright 2001 Garrett Megaw - All Rights Reserved
Angel in Flight
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since 2001-01-07
Posts 381

1 posted 2001-02-08 10:48 PM


This is a great senryu you have writen here!! Thank you for sharing this with us. I just love writing senryus, and it seems to me that you are becoming quite wonderful at writing them. You never know... if you keep practicing you may even become better then ,Allan. It's a wonderful goal we would all like to achieve. Keep posting you are doing great!


Keep searching, we are here, you only have to find us.~ Amanda

Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2001-02-09 12:09 PM


NIcely done here.....proper format this time. Good one.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies
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3 posted 2001-02-09 09:33 AM


very, very interesting thoughts
hmmmm....you've got me really thinking now  
great post

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
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On the streets w/ people
4 posted 2001-02-10 12:19 PM


*Thoughts go around like crazy in Lakewalker's head*
Nice job on the senryu, I like it!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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