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A Butterfly... |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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Last night I had a dream, A butterfly flew my way. But I caught her, Before she flew away. She told me a secret, That I’ll pass unto you. She whispered in my ear, My one true love is you. ~ TMO(S)~ www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 02-08-2001).] |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
this is short and really sweet Tamma! For your Justin of course! Us women and our Justins!! Anyways, really sweet and I liked it a lot. Guys are like stars. There are millions of them, but only one will make your dreams come true. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
A beautiful little piece. Very well-written. you say so much in these few words. Thanks for sharing!  "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
If a butterfly whispered in my ear, I'd stomp on it till it was dead and run really far. Sweet poem tamma!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Honestly, I think this is one of your best pieces... it sounded like music to my ears, good job! JeremY "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
lol @ Dopes Your best poem so far Tamma at least my favorite This is really good wow!!! I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
aaaaaw how sweet!! Isn't love a beautiful thing??? Just like butterflies lol!! Great poem, keep writing! Much luv, ~*~P*R*I*S*C*I*L*L*A~*~  How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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Neokrew Member
since 2000-12-24
Posts 60VA |
Hey, Nice poem but i agree with dopey dope if a butter fly said that to me I would run and hide in my room and try to wake up from the twilight zone  hey it kinda sounds like a new Alice in wonder land called Alice in love or something ( that movie still freacks me out today no lie)--Neo [This message has been edited by Neokrew (edited 02-09-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Aww... so sweet. This is something that I would like to see in a card. Short and simple. I like the story. Good job, Tamma. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Short and beautiful, nice job "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Awww. Sweet. It's nice to see hope and love from the minds of young people. hehexoxo Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
library addtion www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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