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Tears of Glass
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since 2000-12-04

Posts 182
Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure

0 posted 2001-02-08 01:56 PM

What makes me the person that I am?
What makes me hate myself
In ways you'll never know?
I don't know what I want,
And I don't know what to feel.
I am scared to go on in this life,
I don't want to hurt you,
But I am afraid that I already have.
Please forgive me,
For all that I've done.
And maybe one day,
I'll realize who I truly am.
But until that day,
I'll struggle along in silence,
Hoping and praying
That my world won't fall
To a self-inflicted end.
And maybe I'll finally begin to realize
That I mean something to someone,
And that I need you
To help me get through this life...
Because I don't have the strength,
To face this world alone.

*Jennifer

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

1 posted 2001-02-08 04:54 PM

This is a very well-written piece. It sounds like you are having some problems with suicidal thoughts. All I can say is to PLEASE talk to someone who can help you! If you ever need to talk, feel free to e-mail me at weirdbeetlelady@hotmail.com

There are always people who care! God bless

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav

Neokrew
Member

since 2000-12-24

Posts 60
VA

2 posted 2001-02-08 07:59 PM

Oh no you didn't I demand you change that last line

I am here to help even if you do give abuse me don't act like you don't know a certain cherry pie comes to mind oh and a nice WHITE clean shirt that is now stained hehehe I am going to get you back ya know you better watch your back bwahahaha anyways nice poem ( I really need to find another line to use thats getting old) Oh and you better eat lunch me it friday tommorow! Oh and don't invite HER you know who I am talking about wet rats stalker aka Joel. Well cya soon

--Neo

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-02-08 11:26 PM

Nicely done here but what lovebug says is right.......talk to someone about this.
Anyway, I did like the poem here. very powerful.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

4 posted 2001-02-09 06:11 AM

Nice piece, but it was very sad... hope things clear up if this is in fac ur feelings...

JeremY

"I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.)

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-02-09 10:06 AM

Seems like you are still trying to find your true self. I do know for a fact that every person goes thru it. Be strong and this will lead you to the answers.

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-02-10 12:14 PM

This was an excellent poem..this reminds me a lot of one of my friends. Great poem!!! Keep it up!!!

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