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eternal_darkone Junior Member
since 2001-02-07
Posts 14 |
My life is empty A never ending hole I don't understand it I have no control I will keep falling Deeper and deeper Closer to death Within my hole The hole I dig With the anger I feel The anger inside The anger I keep Hidden away So no one will see I will never let it out It will stay locked away With no way out |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You obviously have all this anger inside. At least you know that, and that is a step to getting better. You also mentioned that you know you dig your own hole by letting it build up. I just hope you're capable of letting some of the steam out thru your writing. And if you do, keep doing it. Hope things get better I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done but I do not recommend you holding your anger within......you'll burst eventually.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
What an extraordinary piece...i loved it..absolutely loved it! Keep up the great job! |
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Andrea4writes Junior Member
since 2000-12-03
Posts 31Fayetteville, NC USA |
what to say but you have great poems and that you really found a way to let your feeling out is awsome but always know it is good to talk  <3Andrea ~luvs~ Anthony,<3 You only live once so live it to the fullest.. Love comes and goes but friends stay for ever~!~!~!~!~! |
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