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0 posted 2001-02-08 06:40 AM


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© Copyright 2001 Tony Ryan Johnson - All Rights Reserved
Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-02-08 09:28 AM


Whoa...
POA, you outdid yourself again.  A great piece, simple format but you did a good job.
I like the "hearts and swords" idea.  The poor boy can't feel sadness... just thought.
To be honest, this hit a personal spot for me.
What I gathered officially was sociopath?  Correct me if I'm wrong.  Ode to a Sociopath.  There's something new.  ~_^
Great job, POA.  I'm forced to put this in my library.
-Allan

We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

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