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Secsyy lil angel
Junior Member

since 2000-05-30

Posts 36
Portland Oregon, USA

0 posted 2001-02-08 02:44 AM

I stared out my window and into the night
Overhead a shooting star passed
Catching me up in its flight

I closed my eyes and made a wish.....

I wished for someone to love me
Someone to care
Someone to hold me when I needed them there
Someone to cry with
Someone who wouldnt lie
Someone who would make it ok when I felt as if I could die
Someone I could trust
Someone who could make me smile
Someone that would go that extra mile

And then like a dream come true
I opened up my eyes and I found you

~*Love exists only in the hearts of those who choose to acknowledge its existence...*~

*~To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.~*

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-02-08 09:22 AM

This poem was excellent! Simply outstanding!It's funny how one person can mean everything to you, isn't it? I've never read your work before, but I'm glad that you gave me the opportunity.
Very well done!
-Allan

We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-02-08 04:20 PM

BEAUTIFUL!!! I can't believe no one's reading and replying to this poem. Well, you can always count on Allan to read your poem. So as Dopey and Lake. They're just running a little late i guess. Your poem is magnificent. I'm loving it a lot.

Thanks for the share

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-02-08 11:28 PM

Yea sorry I was running a bit late.....
Nicely done here. Wonderful love poem here fitting the mood for v-day.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

4 posted 2001-02-09 09:56 AM

Aww.....how pretty.

Me liked it lots.
~Carly

"Insane people are always sure that they are fine. It is only the sane people who are willing to admit that they are crazy." (Nora Ephron)

sweetstuff101
Member

since 2000-07-27

Posts 375
OK, USA

5 posted 2001-02-09 04:23 PM

That was beautiful!! I like!! Lol! Keep up the awesome work!!

Much luv,
~*~sweetstuff~*~

How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it????

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

6 posted 2001-02-09 05:49 PM

Impressive. I think this poem would go well as a song.

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

7 posted 2001-02-09 06:13 PM

a very sweet poem! wow, I haven't seen anything of yours in FOREVER!! Hope you stick around!

~*~Jesssica~*~

"Tell me why you cry"

Secsyy lil angel
Junior Member

since 2000-05-30

Posts 36
Portland Oregon, USA

8 posted 2001-02-09 06:19 PM

Hey guyz, great to be back again! Its been a long time since i've wrote anything, jus havent felt inspired. Well, i wanted to thank you all for responding to my poem, it meant a lot to me!

~*Kia

~*Love exists only in the hearts of those who choose to acknowledge its existence...*~

*~To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.~*

Neokrew
Member

since 2000-12-24

Posts 60
VA

9 posted 2001-02-09 06:43 PM

Hey,

This is a really good poem i feel the same way about a person well sorta the same way b/c I feel nobody can feel exactaly how another feels. Anyway well writen and I look forward to reading more of your poems.

--Neo

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

10 posted 2001-02-09 09:23 PM

OMG THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!
i am in love with this

i am a mushy-lovey-dovey type of gal i guess hehehee

GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!! i will keep my eye open for your work in the future!!

~*Valerie*~

*...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

11 posted 2001-02-10 03:06 PM

Hey!
It's a good thing I looked at this one, as acire already promised my reply! (I have been a little bad at replying lately, I could have missed this one!) Now about the poem, though, it's very good, it caught my thoughts at the beginning, sometimes with middles like those I get bored but this one was perfect, and the ended was great! So, it's a really good poem

I hope you are inspired and post some more soon

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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