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eternal_darkone
Junior Member

since 2001-02-07

Posts 14

0 posted 2001-02-07 09:57 PM

I endoure the torture
I live through the pain
I still have the bruses
They won't go away
My bones have been broken
But I cant feel the pain
I dont under stand it
All say the same
No medicine can cure it
It is mine to keep
The pain I feel
Comes from indeep
It comes from the torture
And hatred the same
The hatred I keep
Locked up inside
The hatred thats become
Harder to hide
With each passing day
As it grows stronger
It tries to make me weak
But i con no longer hide it
So bide you farwell
Is you try to fight it

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-02-07 10:15 PM

Nicely done. I'm starting to like you. ^_^
Now GO READ MINE!! lol
-Allan

We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-02-08 01:43 PM

The way you express your feeling is so clear
Your words are so strongly said
hope things get better for you
keep writing, this can help you rid of the hate

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-02-08 11:23 PM

NIcely done here. I liked this. You express your emotions very well.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-02-10 12:05 PM

This was such an amazing poem...It literally took my breath away...great job!

Andrea4writes
Junior Member

since 2000-12-03

Posts 31
Fayetteville, NC USA

5 posted 2001-02-10 12:17 PM

all i can really say is WOW dont know if i want to post if this what i have to compare to that was really awsome..

<3Andrea ~luvs~ Anthony,<3

You only live once so live it to the fullest..
Love comes and goes but friends stay for ever~!~!~!~!~!

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