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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
~Lost~ Who do you turn to when the doors Are all closed? Who will be there to wipe your tears? Who will say, “There’s nothing to fear?” Who will be your guiding light, In this big wide world? Who will give you love, When you need it the most? Who will give you comfort, When your life is falling apart? What do you do, When no one cares? Do you cry some more? Do you let that last thread break? Slipping away? Trying ever so desperately to catch it again. You make up your mind. You want peace. Leaving everyone behind. Turning your back on the world, Like it turned it’s back on you, Such a long time ago... Dark and hallow, No emotions, No golden light, No whispering voice telling you to stop. No. That part of you, Had given up hope... It’s already dead. "Take care and remember a certain innocent lil' Angel will alwayz be there for you..." |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Wish I could be fearless. I hope you don't let that thread break, I hope you don't slip away...amazing poem... ~Carly "Insane people are always sure that they are fine. It is only the sane people who are willing to admit that they are crazy." (Nora Ephron) |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Oh my... very clear emotions desplayed here. I love it. Very good job. Keep 'em coming. -Allan |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I agree with Carly you have expressed you thoughts very clearly i hope you stay strong keep your head up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
Hey everyone: Yeah, I am fearless...but I'm also fearless of death. I'm not afraid and that's why I'm concerned that I might let that thread break... If only things could get better. It's the only birthday present I could ever want! =*( Lotsa Love, Angel xoxoxo "Take care and remember a certain innocent lil' Angel will alwayz be there for you..." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well I do hope things get better. Sorry things aren't running as smooth as you'd like them to be. Nice poem here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
oh wow~ im almost speechless. This is going on my list of my all-time favs at passions. i guess it just reached me in a deep way or something. but yeah, excellent excellent poem. i could go on forever  but i wont..hehe but yeah great lol*dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
Hey: DD- Yeah I hope things get better too. 10-Q! DQ- Thankz, I'm glad you like it. I write sad poems better cause it's the truth...but I hope you'll keep reading...cause not a lot of people do...=) Thank you! Lotsa Love, Angel "Take care and remember a certain innocent lil' Angel will alwayz be there for you..." |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
You're getting quite a few people reading your poems here. I agree with Dopey, I hope things get better for you, and soon. Excellent job on this poem, keep them coming! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Nice job portraying ur feelings, i really enjoyed this one a lot. get better if ur hurting... JeremY "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
Hey: Yeah, thankz guys! Things are starting to look up... especially since people are reading my poems...means a lot to me! Thank you... =) Lotsa Love, Angel xoxoxo |
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