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eternal_darkone
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since 2001-02-07

Posts 14

0 posted 2001-02-07 05:58 PM

A nameless child wonders alone
He tries to find his one true home
He wonders through the darkness
Because he fears the light
The darkness has become his friend
It guards him from the words they speak
And keeps his pain a bay
If he leaves the darkness
And wonders to the light
He know not what he'll do
He sees the others in the light
But he dares not to leave
He wants to be happy
And enter the light
But those in the light
Keep him in the dark

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-02-07 06:10 PM

I liked this poem.......as if he's eternally shunned away from what he desires.....nicely done here.
Welcome to Passions!
I hope to see more from you!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Child of the Stars

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since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

2 posted 2001-02-07 06:16 PM

Ohhhh great first post. Me like lotses....Can't wait to see more!
~Carly

"Insane people are always sure that they are fine. It is only the sane people who are willing to admit that they are crazy." (Nora Ephron)

Angel Bee
Member

since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

3 posted 2001-02-07 07:38 PM

nice poem keep writing

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-02-07 09:22 PM

I love it! Honestly, because I can understand it.
Your style seems to be very intriguing. I look forward to reading more of your work.
-Allan

We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

5 posted 2001-02-07 09:28 PM

Welcome to Passions!
This is a wonderful first post, examining the many things that can keep us from the light. I hope you can get into the light someday. Thanks for sharing

PS-check your e-mail

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

6 posted 2001-02-07 09:33 PM

Very sad and emotional piece here. Welcome to Passions!

*Krista Knutson*

I'm a slow dying flower
In a frost-killing hour
The sweet turning sour and untouchable...
-Natalie Merchant

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-02-08 01:23 PM

Welcome to Passions?

Amazing first post
I love these lines

"He wants to be happy
And enter the light
But those in the light
Keep him in the dark"

I'm glad you've decided to join and I do hope to see you in here more

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

8 posted 2001-02-09 11:50 PM

This was an amazing first post!! I hope you like it here and welcome!!!

Neokrew
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since 2000-12-24

Posts 60
VA

9 posted 2001-02-10 08:10 AM

hey,

Welcome to netpoets you will love it here its great. Anyways I liked your poem it was really good and I hope to see more of your work.

--Neo

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