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Going Away |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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You say you're going away for a while. You say five months ain't that long. You say that our love can endure anything. I say I don't want you to be gone. You say you're going away for a while, You say you'll love me the same. You say you think this will help us. I say is this all a game? For every three things you say, I can only think of one. For every thing you say, I can only think of none. None to fair, none to true, no one to love, no one like you. You say you're going away for a while. You say thinks won't change a bit. You say how we'll always be together, I say I don't get it. But if you're going, then I might as well go too, and we can be going away together, forever me and you. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Guess what ya all!!!!!! I reached 500 poems without knowing it. I think this it 504!!!! I'm proud of myself!!!!!! Also, my Power of the Pen team placed first in our competiton. We rock!!!!! And Justin got his butt suspended from school. Guys are like stars. There are millions of them, but only one will make your dreams come true. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Congrats on 500!!!....You and tamma have reached it at the same time. Congrats on the power of the pen team.......and beautiful poem. I read it like a song.....nicely done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Congrats on 500 and the first place! And nice job on this poem  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks guys!!!!!!!!! Like I said in my other poem, you're the bestests!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Guys are like stars. There are millions of them, but only one will make your dreams come true. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
congratulations for reaching 500 Allysa. Maybe you meant replies, unless you have really shared 500 poems  Good luck to you and Justin I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Great job!! Best of luck to you too. I'm also at 500, but I didn't get a single word of praise! *boo hoo* Aw, well. ^_^ -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Don't rain on my parade acire!!!!!!     Alan, congrats to you too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  Guys are like stars. There are millions of them, but only one will make your dreams come true. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
~*bump, I hope, been having probs with bumping*~ Guys are like stars. There are millions of them, but only one will make your dreams come true. |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Conrats!! Great poem.. Don't stop now.. hehe *Jennifer |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
good poem!! *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
congrats on 500. great post, its sad. hope to see more. regina for those who say I'm their friend, u know me not well for if u did u would not stay around anymore to watch me fall away. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Just wanted to say I liked the poem, Allysa, and congrats to all three of you who reached 500! (Hint: go look in Announcements.) |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Hey! Congrats to you allysa! I think I got to like 700 now... no party for me!!!  Anyway.... nice poem!! xoxo Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I loved this poem!! It flowed so nicely. Great job hun |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Allan stop talking with your ego! jk Congrats... very nice poem, keep posting so I can read ur 1000th!Jeremy "Life is fading me away, far away, but I’m sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark." - Jeremy Raulinaitis---'Fading Me Away' |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
thanks all. jeremy, look forward to the 1000th! i've been here since teen2 and I ain't leaving. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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