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litle_krazy_poet
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0 posted 2001-02-07 01:05 AM


singer
camra
tv
life
door
room
hall
family
car
street
stop
turn
lane
fast
turn
off
street
trees
park
hike
days
camp
paper
pencle
my get away
bliss!!!!!!!


somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun

© Copyright 2001 Matt - All Rights Reserved
Lakewalker
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1 posted 2001-02-07 03:24 PM


We all need to just get away sometimes.  I like this, it made sense to me, which is always good.  Nice job on it

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2 posted 2001-02-07 04:11 PM


Get-aways CAN be blissful, can't they? I love this writing style, it suits you well. Thanks for sharing!



"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



LoveBug
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3 posted 2001-02-07 04:11 PM


Get-aways CAN be blissful, can't they? I love this writing style, it suits you well. Thanks for sharing!



"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



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4 posted 2001-02-07 06:14 PM


Lovebug liked this x2.

Very nicely done here.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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5 posted 2001-02-07 09:16 PM


Well hey, I think that Lovebug likes you.
It's nice to see people using this new format.  Keep it up, everyone!
-Allan

We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

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6 posted 2001-02-08 01:14 PM


very interesting way of putting it  
good job


I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



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