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Wacky hour |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Oooo I'm evil...two posts in one day. Well if I am going to go all technical it IS two days but eh, who cares?  Its just something quick. Is 1:30am and I am really, really happy!!! This is wacky hour too so don't be afraid.  Dave, Dave, My mate so dear, Likes his pitchforks, Likes his beer. When at night, The sun does set, A slab of stubbies, He will get. He has an axe, Made of wood. Instead of plastic, Cuts real good. Has a shop, That sells his toys, Great for chopping, Up those boys. Dave, Dave, My mate so dear, Come on now, Hand us a beer. Like I said, wacky hour..lol. "Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment." Buddha |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
OMG!!!!!!! LMFAO!!!!!! this is wicked funny/good!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! LOL write more of these! everyone deserves a great laugh once in a while ~Valerie~ *...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
sugarpie went into a spasm up there.... anyway.....the poem rocked. Very nice and creative. I personally liked this poem greatly. Good job here!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
whooooah easy there Val this was a great poem though!! great work! -=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=- |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
You gave me a chuckle in a time of dire need. Thanks, EJ. I loved it, great work as usual. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
AF i really liked this poem it is in my faverite format. not shure what your trying to say if anything but grate post  somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
I tink there needs to be a warning on your poems fo people like Valerie..something like "Do not read while operating heavy machinery" But she was right though that was extremely funny. Nice read thank you. Keep postin. "All the kings horses and all the kings men couldn't save the King from death..." -ME >¶Øʆ< [This message has been edited by Poet on Acid (edited 02-06-2001).] |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Haha! How creative! I loved it, great job my friend. JeremY "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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