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Angel in Flight
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0 posted 2001-02-05 05:57 PM


Yesterday is not history,for it has made the future bad.
What has gone before us now has made the present sad.
What is in the present shows what the future holds.
And what the future holds for me will never unfold.
For what the past had foretold I did not wish to see.
And so now in the present My future can not be.


[This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 02-05-2001).]

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Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-02-05 06:04 PM


Praise for the poem.
As for the message, if you need to talk to me, then you know where I am.
I won't give any advice to you within this forum.  I'll talk to you in private, if necessary.
The icon change and red text... added something to this poem.
I've never actually seen an icon affect this before.
-Allan

We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

anonymousfemale
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2 posted 2001-02-05 06:10 PM


Amanda...Keep your head up ok. I don't know what else to say.

~AF~

"Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment."
Buddha


Angel in Flight
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3 posted 2001-02-05 06:43 PM


Allan~ Thank you for the offer to speak to you, but I not to sure I wish to do so. Thank you anyway though I appreciate it. I just dont want everyone to really know about this quite yet, and i dont truthfully wish to talk about it.

Elizabeth~ My head has been up for a while now. *smiling thanks for the advice, but truthfully I should be just fine over time.


[This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 02-05-2001).]

Miracle
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4 posted 2001-02-05 07:22 PM


Amanda, I believe we need to talk about this because if it is what I believe it is this is a very serious matter, and I believe ,Allan, of all people deserves to know what is going on. Please talk to me, someone at passions, or at least tell ,Allan ,what is going on.
P.S. Amanda, we are here for you and you CAN trust us. If this is what i believe you NEED to tell someone about it. love you always, Amanda.

Dopey Dope
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5 posted 2001-02-05 08:38 PM


RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRrrrrrrrrrrright.

Well i thought the poem was very nice, as for the situation behind the poem.....none of my business.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

~sugarpie313~
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6 posted 2001-02-05 09:10 PM


talk to someone. anyone. it does good. trust me, i wish i had earlier in my life. things would of been so much easier. but if you are thinking about what i am thinking about don't do it. i've tried it and it's not the way to go. TALK TO ALLEN, ME, OR WHOEVER. we are all here for you and if you want confidentiality i have no problem with that. i believe that if you open up to someone then it should stayed opened up between only you and that person. so....  please.

~*Valerie*~

*...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed

jeremydraul
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7 posted 2001-02-06 01:50 AM


A lot of meaning in this one but its definately not your best. Keep posting because I am very intrigued by your work.

Jeremy


"I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.)

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