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Tamma
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0 posted 2001-02-05 08:03 AM


If you’re walking down the street
You’d better be careful
Cause ya never know
Where the REDNECK mobile is
It seems to have a mind of its own
Or is it the person behind the wheel?
Pretty soon, I’ll have one of my own,
Not a Camaro, but a truck,
Still a Chevy nonetheless
I’m gonna get me a truck  
Justin said he’d trade me,
But if I wanted a car
I wouldn’t have sold mine
Just so I could have my truck…


I’m getting my OWN REDNECK mobile!!!



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[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 02-05-2001).]

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Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-02-05 10:44 AM


Oh NO!  Everyone beware!
lol
^_^  Wonderful poem, Tamma.  Enjoy yer redneck mobile!
And hey, maybe if I come by you could take me for a spin?  ~_^
Thanks for sharing.  Have fun!
-Allan


We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

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2 posted 2001-02-05 01:17 PM


*runs away*



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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Tamma
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3 posted 2001-02-05 02:57 PM


LoL @ Dopey...Just adding to my library  

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4 posted 2001-02-05 03:09 PM


Oh goshy... you and the redneck pride. Preach on sista!!
Ps. I have a camaro... and it's kinda sucky, but a car nonetheless!!!
xoxo
Jenn


"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia



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5 posted 2001-02-05 03:24 PM


YEE-HAW



More power to you, my fellow West Virginian!



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"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav




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6 posted 2001-02-05 05:55 PM


howdy partner ----

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



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7 posted 2001-02-05 06:04 PM


ahem..now is the time where I get down on one knee and thank my mother for having me in Australia..lol.

Should I be scared of you yet tamma?  

~AF~

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8 posted 2001-02-05 06:29 PM


LOL! Um...I don't drive, so I can't talk about my car. Maybe I'll hitch a ride with one of you guys!
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9 posted 2001-02-06 01:51 AM


Hehe... funny poem. Keep writing for us.

Jeremy


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Tamma
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10 posted 2001-02-06 05:12 PM


LoL @ AF... It's never been me you had to worry about   Justin's the one you should run from when ya see his car coming down the street  

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11 posted 2001-02-07 09:47 PM



UhOh!!


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12 posted 2001-02-09 01:19 PM


Everyone better stay off the roads now.. you never know what might happen!  Hehe.. great poem, I needed a good laugh  

*Jennifer

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