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branden726
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0 posted 2001-02-03 11:35 AM


I feel I have deserted the best friends of all,
The ones who were there night and day,
For I am never here,
Writting,Replying,Giving/Taking advice,
I feel so bad like ive done so much wrong,
Sorry guys but ill try to show you all my love,
If im not here Monday i will be Tuesday,
I will reply more then anyone here,
Im sorry guys but plz forgive me,
But one question remains,
Did you MISS ME?

"i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw"



© Copyright 2001 Branden Jacobs - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-02-03 12:03 PM


Of course we miss you! It can be hard to do everything you want here at Passions and also live up to your obligations in the real world, I know. Remember, this is a FAMILY! We understand if you can't always be here, and when you do return, we welcome you back with open arms. Don't forget that.

Well written poem, also.



"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
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2 posted 2001-02-03 05:07 PM


listen to Lovey Buggy

welcome back

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



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3 posted 2001-02-03 05:16 PM


Ditto. Of course we miss people when they leave us!!  
Welcome back.

xoxo
Jenn


"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia



Allan Riverwood
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4 posted 2001-02-03 06:06 PM


I never got to know you very well, man.  But hey, yeah, it's always a downer to see a poet leave for awhile.
Welcome back.  Maybe now I can get to know you a bit more.
-Allan

We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

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5 posted 2001-02-03 06:38 PM


Hey there Branden, yeah, I'll agree with what they said, we missed ya.  It's good to know you'll be back!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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6 posted 2001-02-03 10:20 PM


Not me!






I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Ina
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7 posted 2001-02-03 10:24 PM


i agree with everyone else of course we missed you, it would be silly not to,
good poem branden
regina

when i wish for you, i wish that could we lie side by side hearts entwined.

branden726
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8 posted 2001-02-04 10:34 AM


Well thank you all and yes allan you will get to know me very well and well all the poems about heartache are gone now and i have a few funny ones and ill post them here in a minute, but first i must thank you all for being so kind, yeah even you dope.

"i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw"



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