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Heart=Life
Junior Member

since 2001-02-03

Posts 29
United Kingdom

0 posted 2001-02-03 10:41 AM

The last few weeks
Have been the best in my life
Spending time together
And having a laugh

I love being with you
When were alone together
Sharing all our deep secrets
That we will keep forever

You've got the prettiest face
That shines wherever you go
Stands out in a crowd
Like a silk ribbon bow

Your voice sings to me
like the birds in the morning
Your blonde hair stands prettier
Than the sun in the dawning
You're a bubbly person,
Clever and smart
Fate put us together
To not be apart

You're the quench for my thirst
The red Rose for my love
You're voice, ever so sweet
Like the coos from a dove

Angel in Flight
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 381

1 posted 2001-02-03 10:59 AM

Heart=Life,

Wonderful first post! The imagry in your poem is just fantastic, I love it so much!
You truely showed us all the power of love, as well as what love is. I can not wait to see more work from you soon. And also, Welcome to passions!!!!! I know you will fit right in, and everyone here is very nice. We trully are "friends within a family" and i would just like to say; i am very glaid you joined our little family here at passions.

~Amanda~

LoveBug

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

2 posted 2001-02-03 11:51 AM

Welcome to Passions! This is a beautiful first post. You describe the way you see you loved one with perfection. I hope to see more of your work around here soon!

PS-check your e-mail!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav

Heart=Life
Junior Member

since 2001-02-03

Posts 29
United Kingdom

3 posted 2001-02-03 01:42 PM

Thanks Amanda,and Lovebug for the nicely done greeting card, it were brill XXXXX

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-02-03 02:03 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

Lovely first post
I see that you are very satisfied with life right now
This girl must really be very special and deserving of such a sweet poem

thanks for deciding to join us
keep sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-02-03 06:04 PM

Absolutely lovely poem. She is a very lucky lady.
Welcome to Passions. Hope you enjoy your stay.
-Allan

We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

luvnkris
Member

since 2000-08-31

Posts 144
Perth, Australia

6 posted 2001-02-03 10:14 PM

Sweet poem! i luvd it!
what a lucky girl - make sure you give the poem to her, she'll luv it!!!!
Luv Jo
xoxo

* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-02-03 10:16 PM

Welcome to Passions!
Well I don't think I could critique this poem. I thought it was well written. Nice one!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

8 posted 2001-02-04 12:08 PM

great poem! it's so sweet.

~kate~

Heart=Life
Junior Member

since 2001-02-03

Posts 29
United Kingdom

9 posted 2001-02-04 01:21 PM

Thanks for your insight everyone!!!

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

10 posted 2001-02-05 03:22 PM

Welcome to Passions

Welcome to passions, I liked this first post of yours, I hope you stay around

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

[This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 02-05-2001).]

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

11 posted 2001-02-05 03:24 PM

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner
I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me

Hallie_Angel
Member

since 2000-12-06

Posts 102

12 posted 2001-02-05 04:02 PM

Welcome!!! Great Job, You really like him/ her. So... keep posting, and we'll keep reading. Once again great job. c-ya!!!

~Catherine

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