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Searching For The Answer |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
My heart is confused, My mind is full of fright. All these questions pop into my head, When you come into my sight. Not knowing whats right, Not knowing whats wrong. No longer feel that connection, I've felt all along. The true test, Is to do whats best for me. But with my heart in the way, The truth is not allowing itself to be seen. To only know whats right, Without myself being betrayed. Dont know who to turn to, Dont know how i feel. The worst feeling i've ever felt, I know now. Is the feeling of the thought of love not being real. |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
kind of the darker side of love question... i loved it...you ended it with a great statment and overall did a great job. "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
great poem! this ones funny  ~katherine~ |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm so sorry that you feel this way But in time I do assure you that you'll learn to take and be happy with what life brings to us. You've shown so much hurt and anger in this piece great write keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice poem here. Hopefully all turns out fine in the end  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Not a good feeling for either side of the situation, trust me on this one. Nice poem, nonetheless. I enjoyed reading it. Best of luck. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Thank you everyone for your replies...No this is not a good feeling but im shur that things will work out the way they are suppose to in the end. Thanks for reading! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
very good representation of love you used very good wordage to get your message across thanks for the read -Jeremy "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
Great poem! I'm sorry you feel this way though.  Hope everything works out for you...Take care, and keep up the great work Sarah *The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love somebody else.* |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey chick!! Its been awhile. Sorry it took me so long to get to this, but ive been WAAAY to busy with Dance and school and church stuff. I barely have enough time to breath, let alone check stuff at PAssions. So im sorry! But this was a great poem, as usual. Tough stuff huh? Ever need to talk you know what to do..its been awhile  Keep your head up and remember it'll all work out the way it's suppose to in the end <3~* Kiley ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Thanks everyone for the replies!! Kiley--thanks gurl i'll definately talk to ya about stuff!! XOxo |
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