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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA 
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This poem is dedicated to my bestist of best friends in the world, who knows who she is!! hehe!! Yeah I know it's bad...but it still shows I care!!! Who? Who silently asked to be my friend  Not knowing how things would work out in the end Who got to know me, outside & in?  Who stuck by my side through thick & thin? Who spoke those comforting words when he broke my heart?  Who told me it would be ok when he tore it apart?  Who spent countless nights, and many endless days  Always trying to cheer me up With that reassuring phrase? Who made me believe that I am strong? And who made me realize where I belong?  Who knows just what to say, when i don't know what to do?  I have to tell you, dear friend, It was always YOU!  How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 02-02-2001).] |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
This is so cute... I love how you added the lil smileies...I think the new ones are so cute   www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
i like the poem i shows how much you love or like you firend and i think that her name is shpney am i right well and way i like the poem  sorry just had to get that out  ~Matt~ somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
That is so sweet! i love it. ~katherine~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
awwww. It's nice to have a friend like that!! xoxo Jenn  "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
so... many... smilies... Ahh! *throws self off bridge Just kidding... if I really threw myself off a bridge, how would I type that? ^_^ Nice, sweet poem. Yes, the smilies add an effect. But personally I found them distracting. Just my opinion. Nice poem. -Allan We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
the smileys did annimate the poem i like that addition to it i think i know who you're talking about on this poem i bet she feels real special now stay friends noth of you thanks for sharing sweetstuff as someone in the forum said before, this poem is "sweetstuff" I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh....thank you sooooooooo much!!! I wuv ya lats!!!! Gosh if only your poems wouldn't make my poems smell like dog poo!!!! Thanx again that was really sweet!!! ~LOVE~ *~*S*T*E*P*H*A*N*I*E*~*  *~*Hope is a walking dream*~* *~*Don't take life too seriosly~~~you'll never get out alive*~* *~*It's hard to tell your urself to stop loving someon |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great tribute to your best friend!! w0h00!! Ok guys but im gonna have to say this..... We have two sexual little face things..... 1. 2. am i the only one who sees this?  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Wonderful poem And great tribute!!! lol @ Dopey, although I am going to ditto dopey on the face matter! What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Holy animated smiles batman Great poem sweet stuff... lol dopes... I pointed out in another post.... I think it's halarious~Jason To steal ideas from one person is plagiarism; to steal from many is research The early bird may get the worm, but the second mouse gets the cheese |
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