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Jenabou
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since 2000-06-13
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Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA

0 posted 2001-02-02 04:48 PM


I just want to thank you
for all youve done
to help me
and for what youve done
to hurt me
You gave me some of the best memories
i could never have asked for more
our time together was precious and ill never forget it or you
the way you smiled everytime you saw me
how we laughed together
at nothing at all
you treated me like gold
most of the time
you showed me the meaning of true love
for all off this thank you
you broke my heart in the worst possible way
i never deserved this
our time together was cut short by your hurtfull actions
im not smiling anymore.......neither are you
laughter can't be heard
you proved to me that nothing lasts forever
and true love is an illusion
but for all this thank you
you only made me stronger
and gave me pleanty to learn from
life isnt always love and laughter
but it was
for a while
with you

_Thank You Jeremy Stevens, your always in my heart_


The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

© Copyright 2001 Jenna-Nicole Boutilier - All Rights Reserved
Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-02-02 05:17 PM


It's good that you are not spiteful, but I suggest that you can move on while still keeping him in your heart.
Keep us posted on this issue, please.  I hate to see a broken heart, but I love to read her poetry.  ~_^
-Allan

We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

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2 posted 2001-02-02 11:00 PM


It's nice too see someone who tries to find the good in every trying situation.  Your possitiveness has made me think of some of my past and future actions to situations.  Thanks for posting this

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



katherine
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since 2000-06-10
Posts 365
Canberra Australia
3 posted 2001-02-02 11:59 PM


great poem. It's good that you're able to remember the good times not just the bad.

~katherine~

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4 posted 2001-02-03 08:39 PM


Nice one here. I liked it.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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