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Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2001-02-02 04:45 PM


Ok, we all know that I'm dating Justin, a REDNECK . So of course, hes drives a REDNECK Mobile. But this ain't a normal car...It's a '78 primar gray Camaro, with a decal on the windshield, that says, you got it, REDNECK ....Heheh Just thought I'd tell ya bout that...anyways heres my poem:


This has been one helluva week
Definitely not what I expected
As I drifted off to sleep Sunday night
When I got home Monday
I found out why the phone had rung
So late the night before
My sisters’ dad had died
They’re both in tears
While I’m developing
A problem of my own
I’ve stared to hang out with someone new
He’s becoming a friend
But they didn’t see it that way
“They” told him that
I walked out of the cafeteria
Holding another guys hand
I swear, I wouldn’t do that
Then my lil brother
Started saying I was pregnant
Which I’m definitely not
Once things finally calm down
They start it again today
But it wasn’t his friends this time
They knew it was hurting me
The words he said were so very damaging
But where did he get it from?
The only thing Justin and I could think
Was Ricky, my ex had said something to him
Which he’s very good for, he’s done it before
He was calling me a slut, in not so many words
Just because I hang out with a lot of guys
Almost like he was holding my mistakes
From the past against me
I’ve learned from them
And, I think, I’ve improved myself
But either way, it’s not his business
Justin was so mad, he clenched his fists
Trying not to go off but something tells me
There was a reason he left me so early today
Could he have fought him @ the “Redneck Mobile"?


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Jenabou
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1 posted 2001-02-02 04:51 PM


this was really good
sounds liek you had quite a busy week
i hope everyhting turns out right for ya!!
just keep smiling and dont let other ppl's lies get to ya

The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

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2 posted 2001-02-02 05:19 PM


Heh... keep your chin up.
Best of luck.
-Allan

We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

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3 posted 2001-02-02 07:49 PM


I hate being accused of things. Especially when they are only half-truths. Or not truths at all. Good luck.  

xoxo
Jenn


"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia



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4 posted 2001-02-02 11:03 PM


hmmmmm....interesting
as long as you know these rumors aren't true, keep you head up

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



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5 posted 2001-02-03 02:19 PM


Hmmmmmmmmm........redneck mobile......that's be a cool title of a movie or a book.




I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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