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Allysa
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0 posted 2001-02-02 08:25 AM


I don't know why I care anymore,
I don't know how I can.
I don't know why I love you anymore,
I don't know who I am.
I don't know what's happening anymore,
I don't know why I care.
I don't know what I'm thinking anymore,
I don't know how long I'll be there.
I don't know what to do anymore,
I don't know why I try.
I don't know if you love me anymore,
I don't know if I'll cry.
I don't know if I'll hurt anymore,
I don't know if I need you.
I don't know if I'll try anymore,
I don't know what to do.

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just a little something of a stupid poem I wrote.  Hope ya all like it.

Guys are like stars. There are millions of them, but only one will make your dreams come true.


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Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-02-02 08:30 AM


Oh, yeah.  It's cute.
Seems like you have a lot of questions.  There were a few that I could relate to myself.
Keep up the good work.  Good luck finding answers.
-Allan

We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

Allysa
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2 posted 2001-02-02 09:07 AM


Thanks Allan, for reading this. I'm bored. I'm at school, and I'm bored, but anyways, thanks much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! C-ya areound    

Guys are like stars. There are millions of them, but only one will make your dreams come true.


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3 posted 2001-02-02 05:04 PM


hmmmmm......different
i like the way you penned it though
all these unknowns in your life
i guess we all go thru that
don't it drive us crazy
keep sharing asylla
by the way, is this about nitsuj

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



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4 posted 2001-02-03 09:49 AM


I liked this poem and i can relate to it all too well. So many questions but i cant seem to find the answers either. I hope you find them out soon...
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5 posted 2001-02-03 10:13 AM


I do know some of these feelings all too well. Sorry you're questioning so much... however it leads to important answers, usually.
xoxo
Jenn


"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia



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6 posted 2001-02-03 08:14 PM


We all go through the "I don't know's".....but hey......most often than not we get through them.......


-You say i'm tragic
I say it's magic kid.
You say i'm lucky
We all know it's in the cards.- Smashing Pumpkins




I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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7 posted 2001-02-05 02:07 PM


Thanks much everyone!!!!!!!!
Dopey you are awesome!!!!!!!! I love the thing about the shadow!!!!!!!!!!

Guys are like stars. There are millions of them, but only one will make your dreams come true.


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