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TrueLUV
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 158
Connecticut, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-02-02 01:16 AM



DOS CHICAS PARA TÍ
CON ELLOS QUIERO DECIR
TE QUIERO, TU ADORO, MI VIDA
PONLE TODA TU ATENCIÓN
PORQUE SON TU CARAZÓN Y EL MÍO,

TRES CHICAS PARA TÍ
QUE TENDRÁN TODO EL CALOR DE UN BESO
DE ESOS JAMÁS ENCONTRARÁS
EN EL CALOR DE OTRO QUERER.

A TU LADO VIVIRÁN Y SE HABLARÁN
COMO CUANDO ESTÁS CONMIGO
Y HASTA CREERÁS QUE TE DIRÁN
TE QUIERO.
PERO SI UN ATARDECER
LAS CHICAS DE MI AMOR SE MUEREN
ES PORQUE HAN ADIVINADO
QUE TU AMOR ME HA TRAICIONADO
PORQUE EXISTE OTRO QUERES

CON QUE TRISTEZA MIRAMOS UN AMOR SE NOS VA-ES UN PEDAZO DEL ALMA QUE SE ARRANCA SIN PIEDAD

Sorry about this if you don't understand I will translate it shortly   gracias

© Copyright 2001 TrueLUV - All Rights Reserved
jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118
State of Despair
1 posted 2001-02-02 01:18 AM


I dont know spanish.
I like the FORM!  

-Jeremy Raulinaitis

"I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.)

Allan Riverwood
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2 posted 2001-02-02 08:35 AM


I don't know spanish either!  ~_~
And I s~o wanted to bring this up to the top!
Well, here I do so anyway.
I promise I'll post something in French (the Canadian version of Spanish) someday soon.  French class starts today.  Yay!
-Allan

We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

a_little_girl
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since 2000-05-08
Posts 307
San Alejandro, HI, USA
3 posted 2001-02-02 10:33 AM


Sabe un poco de espanol (I know a little bit of Spanish). Esa poema es muy buena! (This poem is really good!) Hasta La Vista!  


**No weapon will pierce my heart, no hand will be raised to harm me as long as I write.**
~a_little_girl



Acies
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Twilight Zone
4 posted 2001-02-02 05:07 PM


huh?

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2001-02-02 07:00 PM


Oh please do translate...I would very much like to see this....it sounds very nice
Alwye
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In the space between moments
6 posted 2001-02-02 10:27 PM


Muy bien!  Yo hablo espanol un poco.  I'd love to hear the entire translation!  I'm on my 4th year of spanish, but there's still alot I don't know!

*Krista Knutson*

I'm a slow dying flower
In a frost-killing hour
The sweet turning sour and untouchable...
-Natalie Merchant

katherine
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since 2000-06-10
Posts 365
Canberra Australia
7 posted 2001-02-03 03:11 AM


i don't know what it says but it looks cool. hurry up and translate it!

~katherine~

Dopey Dope
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8 posted 2001-02-03 09:18 PM


Well.........if you glance at where I am from you'll all turn green with envy. Yes I understood every word of it.....oh so sorry hahaha.....
Nice love poem.....



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Angel in Flight
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since 2001-01-07
Posts 381

9 posted 2001-02-04 10:05 AM


Un poema maravilloso que usted tiene aquí!!  Soy así que feliz usted
lo compartió con nosotros.  Continúe el trabajo.



Suit yourself~The most powerful phrase a person can ever say. Once you hear it you will never be the same.


Ina
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada
10 posted 2001-02-05 12:41 PM


i dont know spanish, but  a friend of mine who does, translated it to me.
beautiful!
i ll look for your translation.
regina


for those who say I'm their friend, u know me not well for if u did u would not stay around anymore to watch me fall away.

Angel in Flight
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Posts 381

11 posted 2001-02-05 12:56 PM


Ina, she does have a traslation already posted it is called two girls and three girls. Just thought i would let you know so you can go see it.

Suit yourself~The most powerful phrase a person can ever say. Once you hear it you will never be the same.


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