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StarPryncess17
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0 posted 2001-02-01 06:57 PM


I'm just  me
that's all I can be
please don't expect more
I can't give you that
I can give you my heart
I can give you my soul
but remember that this is a privelege
easily taken away
I've been broken before
but not again
remember to be careful
I'm fragile like a doll
simple on the outside
with all my curls
and all my make-up
but complex...
very complex within
remember I'm only what I want to be
Nothing more
ever
so when you wake
and I'm gone
know it was because I am only
what it is I want to be
I love you
remember those words
let them ring in the day
every day for you
but don't abuse them...
I won't very well
be here tomorrow otherwise

~*~more simplex than my usual stuff...just a little rant about my thoughts.~*~


"Tell me why you cry"

© Copyright 2001 Jessica Lynn - All Rights Reserved
Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-02-01 06:59 PM


And what a rant it was.
I feel like I know you better for having read this.  Very good job.
-Allan

Would you really want everything that you thrive for, if you could never appreciate it?

StarPryncess17
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2 posted 2001-02-01 07:07 PM


and what a kind reply! You are such a peach (that's a good thing) the last couple times I've talked to you, I've found you to be such an interesting person. Such an intellect, anyways, thanks so much for the kind words.   ~*~Jessica~*~

"Tell me why you cry"

Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2001-02-01 07:10 PM


Wow......ok it's official....nobody can use that crying little face ever again. It's really REALLY sad looking *tear*......
anyway nice rant......expressed well.




I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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4 posted 2001-02-01 08:18 PM


oh Jessica, temper temper
it's always good to sometimes release that steem within you.
specially if it's done in writing
that's the safe way  
thanks for sharing pryncess

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



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