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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Misleading and vague Veil covering truth Inside your heart all misdeeds lie Harsh and cruel Pretending you're a saint I am not led by pure ignorance As you may still believe You are the most Hateful part of my life Scornful, ruthless One day you will see "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice here. I liked it........for some odd reason I had this feeling of veangance within the poem........no idea why I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
nice poem, keep writing |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
a lot of anger and hatred your poem defenitely shows this there you go, let it out thru words that's a good thing to do just don't do anything bad -- actions i mean thanks for the read I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Ooh... sounds like this person is in for a nasty surprise... some day. I've never seen the vengeful Jenn C before. I like her. ^_^ -Allan Would you really want everything that you thrive for, if you could never appreciate it? |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Never seen the veangeful side to Jenn eh? I don't come out too often, yet recently my poetry's been reflecting otherwise.  heheAnyway, Acire, have no fear, I'd never DO anything bad, don't got the guts. That's why I write. Luv ya all. xoxo Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
Very Nice! I luv it!! great job on this one, keep it up! Much luv, ~*~SweetStuff~*~ How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
yes, indeed, this poem comes across with a lot of... (dopey said it best) veangance. I like how this poem is written too. a bit of a different style from you. short descriptive fragments instead of sentences. I thought it read great.. good job ~Jason To steal ideas from one person is plagiarism; to steal from many is research The early bird may get the worm, but the second mouse gets the cheese |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
angry angry Jenn. great poem! ~kate~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thanks Katherine!  xoxo Jenn "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
such... cruel words... i loved it! really made me think about things thanks a lot for the read -Jeremy "I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.) |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thank you Jeremy! xoxo Jenn  "I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia |
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