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Hardkore
Junior Member

since 2001-01-31

Posts 33
San DIego, California

0 posted 2001-01-31 10:50 PM

Visions surround me
Consisting of my fears and hopes
Is it a glimpse into the future
Or just an archie of the past

Passion fuels my love
Passion becomes consumed by love
Without my love I become passionless

DreadedLiver
Member

since 2001-01-23

Posts 56
Alter, Ego

1 posted 2001-01-31 11:21 PM

wow... nice
it was very belivoquent
i enjoyed this a lot, a lot of undeciveness
bravo!

-JDR

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

2 posted 2001-02-01 03:29 AM

Hardkore:

Your format was very nice and to the point. We are all surrounded by those images. I think that regardless of whether or not the images are prophetic, we need to procede with life. That's the conclusion I've drawn in my poem In Silence we Talk.

I know how this sort of thing feels. You've expressed it well. I hope that you are successful.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-02-01 03:10 PM

Really good one here. The thoughts are just wonderful. I liked this.....short but very deep.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-02-01 06:43 PM

beautiful expression of thoughts and questions

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-02-01 06:47 PM

Nice job... it's tough to fit thoughts into such a small area, but you had a simple yet powerful message.
Are you familiar with Senryu? Perhaps you should be, judging from this poem you might like it.
Plus everyone else here is already sick of all mine... hehehe... maybe we just need someone else doing them too?
I'll talk to you later.
-Allan

Would you really want everything that you thrive for, if you could never appreciate it?

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