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TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
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California

0 posted 2001-01-31 10:47 PM


Why should I have to be the one that says I'm sorry?
Because you got mad for me going to a party.

I don't get how you can just stop talking to me,
Because I'm not the person you want me to be.

I've tried so hard to be a good friend,
But if you don't talk to me soon this frienship is about to end.

The pain you put me through hurts worse then you will ever know,
Because I'm not one of those people who let my feelings show.

You have been the best friend I have ever known,
But when you do this I rather be in the world alone.

It really seems like you just don't care,
But I promise you this whenever you need me I'll always be there.

If this friendship is over I might just cry,
But I hope at least you have enough heart to say goodbye.

Without you my life will probably be filled with sorrow,
But I guess I'll have to just pray things will get better tomorrow.
  Lauren

This is the exact situation I'm dealing with today and it's killing me seriously.



[This message has been edited by TopGunLauren (edited 01-31-2001).]

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DreadedLiver
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since 2001-01-23
Posts 56
Alter, Ego
1 posted 2001-01-31 11:19 PM


im sorry to hear about your situation
i hope things get better fast
this poem must have made you feel better
great job!!

-JDR

Ina
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada
2 posted 2001-02-01 01:39 PM


o this sort of situation really isnt fun at all. if u ever want to talk email me or icq me.
great poem
regina


when i wish for you, i wish that could we lie side by side hearts entwined.

Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2001-02-01 03:20 PM


Wow, a lot of pain here. I do not know what yer going through but I hope it flies by soon.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
4 posted 2001-02-01 03:38 PM


Very nice poem, I hope things get better between you and you're friend soon, I know how much things like that can hurt.

"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.


Angel Bee
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since 2001-01-30
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Virginia
5 posted 2001-02-01 05:01 PM


I hpe your situation gets better. keep writing  
MidnightMaverick
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since 2001-01-15
Posts 35
Duluth, MN, USA
6 posted 2001-02-01 05:51 PM


Your display of emotions is absolutely great. I am sorry to hear that this situation is hurting you. I hope it gets better soon. Keep on writing.

-Maverick

Acies
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7 posted 2001-02-01 07:19 PM


Lauren,
if this is a true friendship, things will turn out right.  Even the very best of friends due argue/fight too.  No matter how close and similar friends are to each other, each person is still different.  This cause problems, and problems could also be good.  This might even strengthen your friendship in the future.  Talk to your friend.  That's the best thing to do.  If you think your friend needs some cooling off, give your friend the space for now.  Obviously, you don't need some cooling off, the poem shows that......Good luck, hope you two stay friends

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



DancinQueen
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8 posted 2001-02-01 10:36 PM


hey chic~ I really liked this. Been through it before. And the only thing to do is wait and see if it works out. and if it doesnt then shes not worth your time on anyways if shs to stupid to not be friends with someone like you. "A friendship that ends, never began" just remember that  

*dq


¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤

NeverSayDie
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since 2001-01-18
Posts 39
Duluth, MN & Grand Forks ND
9 posted 2001-02-01 10:46 PM


sorry to hear about a friendship in trouble
hope iot gets better soon

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
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California
10 posted 2001-02-01 10:52 PM


Thanx for all the replies!
anomaly187
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US
11 posted 2001-02-02 08:08 PM


hey this is a sad poem..
i really liked it..think it's
the first i've seen from you.
great work!

by the way where in california do you live?
youthinexile@yahoo.com

"When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro"



katherine
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since 2000-06-10
Posts 365
Canberra Australia
12 posted 2001-02-02 09:03 PM


hope everything gets better really soon! don't worry it will all work out for the best!
great poem!!

~katherine~

TopGunLauren
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Posts 718
California
13 posted 2001-02-03 03:00 AM


Bump!
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14 posted 2001-02-03 09:58 AM


This is the exact situation im dealing with too and i feel the same exact way but i dont exactly know what to do. I hope things do get better tomorrow...
TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
15 posted 2001-02-06 01:12 AM


  It;s been 3 weeks now and she still won't talk to can someone tell me why?
  Lauren

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