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Angel Bee
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since 2001-01-30
Posts 176
Virginia

0 posted 2001-01-31 07:51 PM


Thank you Mom

Thank you for always loving me,
no matter what I did or what I couldn't see.
Thank you for never giving up hope,
and for never really washing my mouth out with soap.
Thank you for forgiving me all those times I let you down,
and for always laughing when I acted like a clown.
Thank you for taking care of me when I was sick,
and for never letting me be the last pick.
Thank you for taking me where I wanted to go,
and for pulling me up when I was low.
Thank you for always believing in me,
and for letting me see who I could be.
Thank you for always providing me with care,
and for teaching me to share.
Thank you for all you've done in my life,
for all the pain, the love, and the sacrifice.
Know that I will always love you too,
So in all Thank You.


© Copyright 2001 Angel Bee - All Rights Reserved
~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14
Posts 375
Maine, USA
1 posted 2001-01-31 08:22 PM


This is the most absolute, hands down, no arguments, most sweetest poem i have ever read in all my 16 years. LOL ok i may be exaggerating on the no arguments cuz i have a feeling other ppl might argue but... *L* i love this!!  everyone should say Thanks to their mom. and what a wonderful way to say it you've done. congrats    

~*Valerie*~

*...Remember your roots, my friend they're right down below, because heroes come and heroes go...* - Creed

MidnightMaverick
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since 2001-01-15
Posts 35
Duluth, MN, USA
2 posted 2001-01-31 08:34 PM


Nice one. Moms are very important in our lives. even if we often don't get along with them. Keep up the good work.

-Maverick

Ina
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada
3 posted 2001-01-31 08:43 PM


wish i could say something nice about my mother but i cant.
amazing dedication. give it to her.
regina

when i wish, i wish that could we lie side by side hearts entwined.

Allan Riverwood
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4 posted 2001-01-31 09:22 PM


Very nice! Save it for mother's day, is all I can say!  Not only will it touch her deeply, it will also save you a few bucks!  ~_^
-Allan

Would you really want everything that you thrive for, if you could never appreciate it?

Dopey Dope
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5 posted 2001-02-01 02:00 PM


This was a beautiful tribute to your mother. very well done here.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies
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6 posted 2001-02-01 03:44 PM


This is what we call "UNCONDITIONAL LOVE"
the poem is a perfect example of it
Your mom must be someone really special


I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



luvnkris
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since 2000-08-31
Posts 144
Perth, Australia
7 posted 2001-02-01 09:28 PM



that was gorgwous! i love my mummy! but sometimes i take for granted all she does for me and i don't take the time out to say i love her and thank her for everything!
that was so sweet! i'm sure she'll love it!
Luv Jo
xoxo


* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*



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