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Angel Bee
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since 2001-01-30
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0 posted 2001-01-31 04:03 PM


~A guy and a girl~


There once was a girl who laughed and smiled
There once was a guy who would always go that extra mile

The two were great friends
And together a lot of time they would spend

They laughed and told each other about their day
They were always together never too far away

The girl would do anything for him and she knew he would do the same
They avoided anything that would cause the other any pain

Inside both the guy and the girl knew deep in their heart
That there wouldn't be a day when they would part

Both knew there were more feelings there
And both always said just a little prayer

They wanted to be sometimes more than just friends
So that they could always be together til the very end

But this guy and girl were very scared
That they would loose something that they already shared

So for now they keep their feelings locked inside
And by friendships "rules" they will abide

This is a story with a happy ending though you see
Because both will always be there for each others every need

They know they'll always be together
Today, tomorrow, and in any kind of weather

They'll always be great friends
Now, and forever, until the very end

© Copyright 2001 Angel Bee - All Rights Reserved
Hallie_Angel
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since 2000-12-06
Posts 102

1 posted 2001-01-31 04:08 PM


Allysa and I have a guy friend like that except we just like him as a friend. Zach is a fun and kool guy to be with.!!! Good Poem, is this of any relevancy to your lif by any chance???

                                   ~Catherine

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2 posted 2001-01-31 05:10 PM


This was a nice one. It seems like you have it all figured out there. Hope you actually do abide by the rules. Sometimes impulse takes over our bodies and we break them.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Ina
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since 2000-10-09
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Quebec, Canada
3 posted 2001-01-31 08:20 PM


friends are amazing to hsave and to cherish. your format was amazing.
regina

when i wish for you, i wish that that we lie side my side hearts entwined.

MidnightMaverick
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since 2001-01-15
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Duluth, MN, USA
4 posted 2001-01-31 08:36 PM


Awesome piece of work! keep it up.

-Maverick

Allan Riverwood
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5 posted 2001-01-31 09:33 PM


This is very touching, coming from a guy with many girl friends who are not "girlfriends," y'know?
Touching poem.  And well written, once again.
Thanks for the impressive read.
-Allan

katherine
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since 2000-06-10
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Canberra Australia
6 posted 2001-01-31 10:23 PM


great poem! keep it up

~katherine~

Acies
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7 posted 2001-02-01 03:04 PM


you too are very lucky to have each other as friends
seems like you do havd a give and take realtionship
thanks for the read

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



luvnkris
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since 2000-08-31
Posts 144
Perth, Australia
8 posted 2001-02-01 09:30 PM



very cool!
its always good to have close guy friends, get away from the common *****yness you get with girls sometimes!
i have too best friends that are guys! one of them is my great boyfriend who i love soooo much!
Luv Jo
xoxo


* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*



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