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Stephanya
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0 posted 2001-01-31 03:25 AM


As I am awaiting to kiss you
And feel your ever-loving arms
I remember when we first met and how I knew
I could love your cute princy charms
Today when I gaze into your enchanting eyes
My sunflower ogglers see a blue gleaming spark,
A reminder of the love between us pries
Our strength combined causes angels to hark
Whenever we touch we melt into one
Separation and distance attempts to linger
Hearts interlocking make our unification
Stronger than ever with doors trying to hinder
Our orbit in unequal sectors may keep the stress alive
But our yearning affection overcomes this pressure
And forces our petty differences to be swept aside
By virtue of invisible actions, our words will constantly reassure
Yet one fixation we internally knew
Continues now and forever that you love me and I love you

Justin + Stephani for Life and beyond...
I Love You Honey  


(:***stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

Ro

© Copyright 2001 Stephani B.-01201 - All Rights Reserved
Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-01-31 03:57 AM


I had to go back into Teen #3 and check, but yes, this is the return of Stephanya!  Nice to see you finally found Teen #4, eh?  haha...
Very good poem, as usual!  Or, i suppose, as written in the past...
It really has been awhile.  Great to see you again!  I thought you had left us!  ~_~
-Allan

Would you really want everything that you thrive for, if you could never appreciate it?

Stephanya
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2 posted 2001-01-31 04:42 AM


Get use to it, I come and go often...LOL...I've surprisingly been a member of the teen forums since November 1999   I just changed me member name a few times. Thanks for replying   Toodles!!!

(:*stephani*:)A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end*

Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2001-01-31 12:57 PM


Wonderful job on this poem. Glad to see love this strong.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Jenn Cirrincione
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4 posted 2001-01-31 03:01 PM


This is  very sweet!! Kudos on the great guy!

xoxo
Jenn


"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??


Stephanya
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5 posted 2001-01-31 04:26 PM


***bump***


(:*stephani*:)A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end*

jeremydraul
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6 posted 2001-01-31 10:14 PM


alot of justins... maybe ill change my name
well very kind poem
full of rich love....
i liked it a ton

-JDR

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7 posted 2001-02-01 02:40 PM


Steph, don't come and go.....please just stay :>
It's nice to see you are doing good specially with your relationship with your special guy.
For some reason, he's another Justin
Everyone in here is in love with a Justin
beautiful poem keep posting

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



luvnkris
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Perth, Australia
8 posted 2001-02-01 09:37 PM



sweet poem - i enjoyed it a lot!  
i'm not in love with a Justin, i'm in love with a Kristian!
actually i hardly know any Justin's! maybe its not an Australian name!
Luv Jo
xoxo


* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*



Stephanya
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9 posted 2001-02-02 03:26 AM


*~*~*~*BUMP*~*~*~*
thanx AGAIN everyone
Toodles!


(:*stephani*:)A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or
relationship is about to end*
XOXOpsst...

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