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Angel Bee
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0 posted 2001-01-30 10:03 PM


a feeling of love

what does love feel like inside?
is it a feeling that will go deep in you heart and hide,
or is ita feeling that will always be known,
from the day you are born til you are grown?

i found that feeling of love
it came and it went with the grace of a dove
but i know that i will love again
because this feeling doesn't have an end

so never be afraid to love
because this is a wonderful feeling sent from above
always let your love be known
and i promise you'll never be alone

this was a quick one i wrote just to let everyone know love is a good feeling  )

© Copyright 2001 Angel Bee - All Rights Reserved
Hallie_Angel
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1 posted 2001-01-30 10:59 PM


Great Job!
Good explanation of love.
See ya!


                               ~Catherine

jeremydraul
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2 posted 2001-01-30 11:14 PM


oooooh
"i found that feeling of love
it came and it went with the grace of a dove"
nice nice nice, i love your words about love!
keep it up

-JDR

"I am two minded. I have two sides of thinking."

Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2001-01-30 11:15 PM


Yes, love is a GREAT feeling. In fact, I'm a hopeless romantic.......I'm going to have to put love before EVERYTHING. Love is all reigning and all powerful.

great poem expressing that.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood
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4 posted 2001-01-31 04:49 AM


Yah, love is great.  
^_^
Another excellent poem, Angel Bee.  
Fantastic.
-Allan

Would you really want everything that you thrive for, if you could never appreciate it?

Stephanya
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since 2000-11-03
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5 posted 2001-01-31 04:57 AM


Love, Love, Love...the best feeling I've ever felt so far...of course I'm in love with ONE of the "many Justin's" listed in all of us girl poems...LOL

(:*stephani*:)A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end*

Acies
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6 posted 2001-01-31 05:39 PM


i feel the same way
but we still can't blame people who get hurt to downgrade love at their time of hurting
that's a normal reaction i guess
but love is a great feeling, specially if the person loves you as much too

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



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