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MidnightMaverick
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since 2001-01-15
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Duluth, MN, USA

0 posted 2001-01-30 08:45 PM


Dancing with your arms around me, I look into your eyes and I see the fire within, a buring passion and desire for a taste of endless love.
There's only one thing that will keep us apart and it's a much higher power than either of us can understand.
No one ever wants to be lonely, spending night after night in a darkened room with a candle as the only light.
I could give you that taste if you only would let me. I'd be willing to hold on to you throughout the night as our bodies dance in the moonlight.
No one ever wants to be lonely, crying through the days wishing to be loved by someone else as its meant to be.
Standing in the moonlight, your eyes gazing into mine, I feel the power of love washing over us as the winds swirl around bringing us closer together, it's the power of love that draws us together.
No one ever wants to be lonely, away from the one they love, the one that's meant to be. I love you, don't leave me all alone. I don't want to be lonely.

*Dedicated to Sparticus*

© Copyright 2001 MidnightMaverick - All Rights Reserved
anomaly187
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1 posted 2001-01-30 08:48 PM


you can say that again..
i really loved the emotion
you put into this and in
the form you wrote it in..
almost ends on a somber note
with "i don't want to be lonely"
but it adds alot to the  poem..
great post!


"When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro"



HiddenSparklez
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since 2000-12-29
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British Columbia, Canada
2 posted 2001-01-30 09:12 PM


Tru dat, no one wants to be lonely. Good poem

"You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear

Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2001-01-30 11:05 PM


What a wonderful job on this one! I am left in awe. I loved every word of it. Great job on this one mav. My #1 favorite from you so far.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118
State of Despair
4 posted 2001-01-30 11:18 PM


cant say ive read you a lot before
being alone, well it just sucks
nice job on this one

-JDR

"I am two minded. I have two sides of thinking."

Acies
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5 posted 2001-01-31 04:49 PM


wonderful feelings/sentiments
i hope you did say this to that special someone
thanks for sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR



MidnightMaverick
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since 2001-01-15
Posts 35
Duluth, MN, USA
6 posted 2001-01-31 05:20 PM


thanks so much for your replies people.   it means a lot.

-Midnight Maverick

[This message has been edited by MidnightMaverick (edited 01-31-2001).]

NeverSayDie
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since 2001-01-18
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Duluth, MN & Grand Forks ND
7 posted 2001-02-01 10:52 PM


nice poem glad to know other people have needs to be wanted keep up the great work
Allan Riverwood
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8 posted 2001-02-02 08:41 AM


I love it.
The way you wrote it... made you seem so helpless.  This is a prime emotion for my own work, so I could really relate.
I said this already but...
I love it!
-Allan

We used to hate people, now we just make fun of them. It's more effective that way. --KMFDM

Lakewalker
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9 posted 2001-02-03 06:44 PM


This is definitely going in my library.  I love the way this is written, the emotions seem so sincere, I'm left in an awe by the poem.  Wonderful job, truly.

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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katherine
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since 2000-06-10
Posts 365
Canberra Australia
10 posted 2001-02-04 01:54 AM


this is beautiful!! I love it!
keep it up

~kate~

litle_krazy_poet
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since 2001-01-17
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11 posted 2001-02-04 02:48 AM


i like the poem shows a lot thanks for the post

somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun

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