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Tamma

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since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2001-01-30 05:01 PM

Down the line, it won’t matter,
What I’m thinking @ this moment.

Down the line, it won’t matter,
That I’ve all but given up.

Down the line, it won’t matter,
That he’s the reason I’m still here.

Down the line, it won’t matter,
That ive asked him to take me away.

Down the line, it won’t matter,
That I don’t live up to my name.

Down the line, I hope he’ll know,
That I did everything to be with him.

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I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me

Greeneyes617
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since 2000-11-22

Posts 329
Arkansas

1 posted 2001-01-30 05:36 PM

I really like this...You did a good job. Thanks for posting it.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-01-30 07:34 PM

Really sweet poem, but a lot of stuff matters down the line. Make sure you know what yer doing when you say that.
But yea very sweet.....doing it all for him.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-01-30 07:38 PM

Perhaps it is best to look more at the line you stand on than it is to look further on... if you enjoy your position.
Good poem, Tamma.
-Allan

Would you really want everything that you thrive for, if you could never appreciate it?

jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

4 posted 2001-01-30 11:26 PM

very sweet indeed
thanks for sharing your newest justin poem *wink*
keep posting plz

-JDR

"I am two minded. I have two sides of thinking."

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2001-01-31 03:16 PM

"down the line..." I find myself saying stuff like that. Tomorrow it'll be better. Next week I'll feel better. Etc.... No one seems to be able to live for today.
Good work
xoxo
Jenn

"I'm a big, big, girl, in a big, big world, it's not a big, big thing if you leave me, but I do feel, that I will miss you much..." Emilia

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

6 posted 2001-01-31 05:23 PM

Yea, Dopey, i know alot of things WILL matter down the line...but none of the stuff i really talked about in this poem will

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Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-02-01 02:10 PM

Down the line it will matter Tamma
Everything has a reason
Down the line i hope you'd be a very happy camper :>

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

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